Draft - journal

We need to make improvements to our title sequence; the draft turned out to be too dark due to insufficient lighting (poor lighting control) we also had a few other anomalies which need to be altered. The film was quite shaky and it made it quite difficult to read the text on the screen. I received some feedback; I've learnt that I can use screen recording on a mac computer as an alternative - instead of using a camera (it would be easier to capture close ups etc).

We have already began re-shooting our title sequence; due to the anomalies which had to be fixed. The colour and contrast is more suitable for our improved title sequence. Some of the photographs were repeatedly presented in our title sequence (draft). We removed the images which were presented more than once.