Draft one - Title Sequence

This is the first draft of our title sequence. The lighting is really poor; too dark, we would have to record our footage in a different environment to have a tremendous change to the lighting. The camera was also extremely shaky; which affected the clarity for the viewer and the shakiness needs to be removed in general due to it is unnecessary, we'll may have to consider filing and gathering our footage in another perspective and we may have a group discussion to enhance our ideas to develop our title sequence to assemble a second draft due to the first draft being  unsuccessful. We will present our title sequence to our teacher; to gain feedback to improve our title sequence significantly.